Friday, May 24, 2013

Another Project Update

I got some really helpful feedback from a classmate and made the following changes. There are still a couple things I need to work on, but here's my progress.


3 comments:

  1. I like the changes; the piece looks more solidly cohesive instead of broken into separate sections. Maybe 'shut down' could be bigger, spreading more like the top of a banner? What I do see is that the shut is tilted upward, but down is not tilted in a balanced way to finish the arc you started to make. Definitely looking really good, though! I like that you're sharing the edits as you go.

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    1. Thanks! I just made some updates to reflect your feedback!

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    2. http://www.skillshare.com/Illustration-and-Lettering-A-Hands-on-Approach-to-Label-Design/463036035/projects/10487

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